King of the Hill
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(06-28-2017, 09:46 PM)The Four-Eyed Cat Wrote:  He sits on a throne;
a green and mounded hill.
a velvetty yellow crown
on a cat without teeth.
Waves are gently blown
on a carpet of grass,
in the palace of nature.
as if a royal envoy
brings forth a message:
"summer has come,
king Dandelion."
A pleasant puzzle-poem.  Liked it.  And just try to make a regime change after King D takes over a lawn!  Lopping heads is useless. Smile

Strictly speaking, lines 3 and 8 should have their initial "a" capitalized.   Maybe also the "k" leading the final line (a title).  Also, my spell checker wants "velvety" with only one tee.
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King of the Hill - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-28-2017, 09:46 PM
RE: King of the Hill - by dukealien - 06-28-2017, 10:31 PM
RE: King of the Hill - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-28-2017, 10:35 PM
RE: King of the Hill - by nibbed - 06-29-2017, 12:24 AM
RE: King of the Hill - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-29-2017, 12:29 AM
RE: King of the Hill - by nibbed - 06-29-2017, 12:57 AM



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