06-27-2017, 11:36 PM
(06-27-2017, 08:05 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Lava
Up here on the crust
it’s a delicacy;
the puberty of wanton rock—
God’s sweat.
We speculate that all is cool
but we don’t get comfortable yet.
I like "delicacy", and also "god´s sweat". you made a lot out of lava.
maybe the last line would be stronger if you erase "but we"