Comfort Horizon edit

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Hi, I have enjoyed this.


Funny what a little information can do,                
reflecting me for you,
receding from view
the me you thought you knew.                            this stanza is a bit tricky, but I like it.

Although I'm sure you've always known;
the light had shown
a seed overgrown;                                              
a dagger cutting through bone.                            why a dagger?

The comfort is on the horizon.                               nice, I can hear it sang

What does anyone have to gain,
to welcome pain,
to seem insane
at the risk it's all in vain?                                         I can almost hear the music to this, a crescendo

The future hides behind a glare,                             and verse leading to refrain
but once you're there,
it's all laid bare.
The truth is love will lead to despair,

but the comfort is on the horizon.                          a nice, similar line

Discovering your destiny,
reality
reflects it you for me.
Funny how we can agree to disagree.                    I wanted it to keep going


thank you CRNDLSM.
I like comfort horizon
janine