06-27-2017, 07:02 AM
Nicely done Duke. I enjoyed this. There is a slight metrical hiccup when I read L3 aloud. The accent on "Truth" feels forced and L4 is so melodic, I want to go into it with my tongue on a roll. - Probably a byproduct of your P.S.
Paul
(06-27-2017, 04:14 AM)dukealien Wrote: The Vicious Circle Stop’t(it's out there if you want it bad enough)
A Lie can girdle Earth before
the Truth is out of bed ~
but not before Truth’s pillow tweet
can catch and kill it dead.
(in the Nature of a Broadside)
Paul

