Comfort Horizon edit

[vagabond]

Funny what a little information can do,
reflecting me for you,                                 reflects me for you (just for rhythm)
receding from view
the me you thought you knew.                 this me you assumed (not sure if it can be said like that though)

Although I'm sure you've always known;
the light had shown                         not sure what “the light” would be, though it connects nicely with seeds growing
a seed overgrown;                          maybe “but the seed´s overgrown”
a dagger cutting through bone.        new image –stands a little alone

The comfort is on the horizon.

What does anyone have to gain,               “have to” or “what could anyone gain ” ?
to welcome pain,
to seem insane                             why not go insane? welcoming pain already is in a way
at the risk it's all in vain?                    risking it´s all in vain (damned affinity to rhythm)

The future hides behind a glare,
but once you're there,
it's all laid bare.
The truth is love will lead to despair,         maybe “fear” instead of “truth”

but the comfort is on the horizon.

Discovering your destiny,         
reality
reflects it you for me.
Funny how we can agree to disagree.   don´t quite understand this last stanza, maybe that´s why I almost think the ending would be stronger without it.   “the comfort is on the horizon” is such a good line.