06-26-2017, 09:33 PM
Hey Nibbed! Thanks for the lovely and witty read! Does the title imply the line length?
Thanks again for the read, Janine!
(06-26-2017, 12:32 PM)nibbed Wrote: LilliputianNot much more i can remark on this poem!
Tease, Is this an imperative?
call me
scavenger.
So I had to
steal, beg, and bribe: No need for a comma before 'and'
Steeple keepers,
captains, fishermen,
merchants, ferrymen,
nagsmen, magicians, Lovely summary that flows just naturally
those noose men
whose squareknots, overhands,
bowlines & sheetbends
are now loosed,
stretched into
straight lengths;
Tangled nets
forever unwoven,
pulled & driven,
prayers,
asking integrity's strength.
Thanks again for the read, Janine!

