Lilliputian
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Hey Nibbed! Thanks for the lovely and witty read! Does the title imply the line length?  

(06-26-2017, 12:32 PM)nibbed Wrote:  Lilliputian

Tease,                                                      Is this an imperative? 
call me
scavenger.

So I had to
steal, beg, and bribe:                             No need for a comma before 'and' 

Steeple keepers,
captains, fishermen,
merchants, ferrymen,
nagsmen, magicians,                                         Lovely summary that flows just naturally

those noose men

whose squareknots, overhands,
bowlines & sheetbends
are now loosed,
stretched into
straight lengths;                                                   

Tangled nets                                                 
forever unwoven,                                                 
pulled & driven,

prayers,
asking integrity's strength.
Not much more i can remark on this poem! 
Thanks again for the read, Janine!
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Messages In This Thread
Lilliputian - by nibbed - 06-26-2017, 12:32 PM
RE: Lilliputian - by CRNDLSM - 06-26-2017, 09:16 PM
RE: Lilliputian - by nibbed - 06-27-2017, 02:48 AM
RE: Lilliputian - by vagabond - 06-26-2017, 09:20 PM
RE: Lilliputian - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-26-2017, 09:33 PM
RE: Lilliputian - by Pat Doiron - 07-18-2017, 06:56 AM
RE: Lilliputian - by nibbed - 07-18-2017, 11:26 AM



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