06-26-2017, 09:20 PM
(06-26-2017, 12:32 PM)nibbed Wrote: Lilliputian
Tease,
call me
scavenger.
So I had to
steal, beg, and bribe:
Steeple keepers,
captains, fishermen,
merchants, ferrymen,
nagsmen, magicians,
those noose men
whose squareknots, overhands,
bowlines & sheetbends
are now loosed,
stretched into
straight lengths;
Tangled nets
forever unwoven, the untangling nets made me think of fading integrity.. if intentional: the noose men´s integrity?
pulled & driven, I´d put this line above forever unwoven, just cause nets can´t pull anymore afterwards. forever is a big word, maybe just "unwoven"
prayers,
asking integrity's strength.
I like the words and metaphors, as well as integrity as content of a prayer.
what I don´t quite understand are the first two stanzas, why the subject would or did steal, also not sure what was stolen (probably just me, not getting it)