06-25-2017, 11:15 PM
A very pleasant read. At first thought i couldn't say that it invokes the thought of the afterlive, but rather nostalgia, most likely to time spent with a deceased person - but even on that pretext i felt at first that it didn't quite fit.
After a couple more reads, i realized that the first sentence of the first stanza perfectly describes the title (Making me say "Ohh!" out loud)
The imagery you use is vivid (who smells of sweet sherry and Sunday roast), which is more than instrumental to succesfully convey a feeling of nostalgia.
Nothing more i can add, really.
Thanks for sharing, Keith!
After a couple more reads, i realized that the first sentence of the first stanza perfectly describes the title (Making me say "Ohh!" out loud)
The imagery you use is vivid (who smells of sweet sherry and Sunday roast), which is more than instrumental to succesfully convey a feeling of nostalgia.
Nothing more i can add, really.
Thanks for sharing, Keith!

