Second Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead/For Dawn Fraser, a Radical

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Second Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead/For Dawn Fraser, a Radical

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06-25-2017, 11:40 AM

Hey all,
I revised this poem. Feel free to let me know if it's an improvement or not.

Cheers,
Richard

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Second Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead/For Dawn Fraser, a Radical - by Richard - 06-18-2017, 05:59 AM

RE: For a Radical, Long Dead - by Donald Q. - 06-18-2017, 06:29 AM

RE: For a Radical, Long Dead - by just mercedes - 06-18-2017, 06:52 AM

RE: For a Radical, Long Dead - by nibbed - 06-18-2017, 10:35 AM

RE: For a Radical, Long Dead - by Achebe - 06-18-2017, 10:44 AM

RE: For a Radical, Long Dead - by Richard - 06-18-2017, 11:02 AM

RE: First Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead - by Richard - 06-25-2017, 11:40 AM

RE: First Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead - by nibbed - 06-25-2017, 02:51 PM

RE: First Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead - by Richard - 06-25-2017, 11:40 PM

RE: First Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead - by JKBetts - 06-30-2017, 05:39 AM

RE: First Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead - by Richard - 06-30-2017, 10:05 PM

RE: Second Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead/For Dawn Fraser, a Radical - by Richard - 03-13-2019, 12:00 PM

RE: Second Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead/For Dawn Fraser, a Radical - by billy - 03-13-2019, 12:43 PM

RE: Second Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead/For Dawn Fraser, a Radical - by Richard - 03-14-2019, 11:49 AM

RE: Second Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead/For Dawn Fraser, a Radical - by Knot - 03-14-2019, 08:48 PM

RE: Second Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead/For Dawn Fraser, a Radical - by Richard - 03-15-2019, 11:20 AM

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