06-24-2017, 06:00 AM
Okay this is my first critique so I apologize before hand if I am clumsy about it. I really like the idea behind this that I interpreted. Being befuddled by an artist and infatuation for them is familiar to me. I am not sure I understand the first line but I did understand the rest, or at least I think do. I would possibly rethink the "hornswoggled" line and maybe "mind boggled" as well as they feel a bit forced, though I understand the need to use ridiculous words because the feeling behind the poem seems to be a feeling of ridiculousness that being infatuated with an artist can sometimes give one. So yeah hope I did this right, cheers!