06-23-2017, 03:38 AM
Really interesting reactions, thank you all. I am completely fine with heavy criticism or feedback in general. It seems there is a consensus that it is wordy, or to descriptive in a sense. Interesting. I enjoy reading your reactions just to see how it resonates with other people. Looking back I understand what I did. There is no wrong though, just possibilities. I'm gonna try something fresh, completely different.
