fat rats (edit)

[vagabond]

fat rats                                                                                 ( edit, thanks to Tiger, Nibbed, Luis)


is the energy of guilt measured in calories?
who draws a worth from this word?
anyway, pay with remorse.
 
how to get rid of remorse?
ever tried to remove a shadow?
can´t touch either and both will not leave.
 
how far does this shadow reach?
it´s pulling me back to the past.
rats gnawing, concealed in the dark.
 
what´s there to live on for those rats?
oh, they are overweight,
fed up, but hungry,
always find more.




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fat rats

what is the energy of guilt?
what is the worth of this word?
in equivalent, pay with remorse.
 
what is the proof of remorse?
what is the proof of a shadow?
both can´t be touched, but won´t leave.
 
how is the damn shadow connected?
how can it pull back to the past?
rats gnawing, concealed in the dark.
 
what do they live on, those rats?
oh, they are overweight,
fed up, but hungry,
always need more.

mainly I hope for responses wether and what kind of meaning can be drawn from this, but any type of comment is appreciated including harsh critique, pointing out embarrassing spelling or grammar errors, jokes, deviations from topic and surreal associations.