Wills
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Thanks for your read and comments Janine.

(06-21-2017, 10:55 AM)nibbed Wrote:  Hi Tiger The Lion,
This poem is an emotional poem.


Wills
 
It wasn't you that flopped out dead
on the Godless sheets 
of a hospital bed
when your mother miscarried.
 
But you know you were baptized
by another girl's name.                           




I'm puzzled at Godless sheets... I imagined the scene of a miscarriage to be an occasion for a crisis of faith 
and why it is titled Wills... this was intended to refer to God's will, a mother's will, and a child's will - and the varying weight they carry - I may have missed the mark. 
have a blessed new day
janine
Paul
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Messages In This Thread
Wills - by Tiger the Lion - 06-20-2017, 06:35 AM
RE: Wills - by nibbed - 06-21-2017, 10:55 AM
RE: Wills - by Tiger the Lion - 06-22-2017, 04:23 AM
RE: Wills - by vagabond - 06-22-2017, 04:25 AM
RE: Wills - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-22-2017, 07:18 AM
RE: Wills - by Achebe - 06-22-2017, 07:44 PM



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