06-22-2017, 04:23 AM
Thanks for your read and comments Janine.
(06-21-2017, 10:55 AM)nibbed Wrote: Hi Tiger The Lion,Paul
This poem is an emotional poem.
Wills
It wasn't you that flopped out dead
on the Godless sheets
of a hospital bed
when your mother miscarried.
But you know you were baptized
by another girl's name.
I'm puzzled at Godless sheets... I imagined the scene of a miscarriage to be an occasion for a crisis of faith
and why it is titled Wills... this was intended to refer to God's will, a mother's will, and a child's will - and the varying weight they carry - I may have missed the mark.
have a blessed new day
janine

