Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1)

[Todd]

Tom, Thank you for the comments. I do appreciate your take. We probably come down on opposite sides of enjambment. Though I will say that your comments have often pushed me to be more expansive in line length and to truly ask myself if the break added or detracted. I'm mixed on this one. I can see value in both versions. So, I guess I'll weigh the values (life against a feather) and see what sticks. I will also consider allocating myself more words (love that) to the whetstone part as I tend to be minimalist in my delivery as a matter of course. A lot to think about. Thank you.

Best,

Todd