Second Edit: For a Radical, Long Dead/For Dawn Fraser, a Radical

[Richard]

Hey all,
Thanks for the feedback. I was worried about the the third part. This is why I submitted it though, so I could see what would be said about it. The "Oh capital" is actually alluding to a somewhat obscure poem, but I don't want to give too much away. Besides, it should work without the allusion, so I need to think about that moving forward.

Thanks again,
Richard