Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1)

Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1)

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06-16-2017, 08:05 AM

I mostly appreciated the points you raised around the lines. It's too early to say what will result in an edit. I don't think either of us were justifying just commenting.

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Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1) - by Todd - 12-01-2010, 07:58 AM

RE: Hood - by billy - 12-01-2010, 09:17 AM

RE: Hood - by Todd - 12-03-2010, 06:53 AM

RE: Hood (Revision) - by Todd - 05-18-2017, 05:36 AM

RE: Hood (Revision) - by Richard - 05-20-2017, 01:51 PM

RE: Hood (Revision) - by Todd - 05-20-2017, 09:59 PM

RE: Hood (Revision 1.1) - by Lizzie - 06-11-2017, 09:35 AM

RE: Hood (Revision 1.1) - by Todd - 06-11-2017, 10:54 AM

RE: Hood (Revision 1.1) - by Lizzie - 06-11-2017, 11:00 AM

RE: Hood (Revision 1.1) - by vagabond - 06-13-2017, 07:20 PM

RE: Hood (Revision 1.1) - by Todd - 06-15-2017, 11:07 PM

RE: Hood (Revision 1.1) - by vagabond - 06-16-2017, 07:18 AM

RE: Hood (Revision 1.1) - by Todd - 06-16-2017, 08:05 AM

RE: Hood (Revision 1.1) - by Todd - 06-21-2017, 04:05 AM

RE: Hood (Revision 2) - by Richard - 06-21-2017, 12:07 PM

RE: Hood (Revision 2) - by Todd - 06-21-2017, 02:52 PM

RE: Hood (Revision 2) - by Richard - 06-21-2017, 09:47 PM

RE: Hood (Revision 2) - by Todd - 06-21-2017, 10:59 PM

RE: Hood (Revision 2) - by tectak - 06-21-2017, 11:53 PM

RE: Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1) - by Todd - 06-22-2017, 02:10 AM

RE: Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1) - by Lizzie - 06-22-2017, 06:30 AM

RE: Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1) - by Todd - 06-22-2017, 06:35 AM

RE: Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1) - by Todd - 06-22-2017, 06:59 AM

RE: Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1) - by Lizzie - 06-22-2017, 12:16 PM

RE: Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1) - by nibbed - 06-24-2017, 08:04 AM

RE: Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1) - by Todd - 06-29-2017, 10:31 PM

RE: Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1) - by QDeathstar - 06-30-2017, 08:48 PM

RE: Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1) - by Todd - 07-01-2017, 04:36 AM

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