Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1)

[Todd]

Some very good thoughts, Vagabond. I'll consider them when I pull together a rewrite. I appreciated the mirror you held up so that I could think about my choices. Oh and certainly, no woman would want to be an ingenue--especially if they considered the implications at least. The unreliable narrator is very precisely objectifying this person. I think he's more speaking about what other's (like himself) would call her and not trying to call forth her own self-identity--I honestly doubt that he considers even that concept relevant. I doubt there's any part of her that in his mind belongs to her. There has to be a slight level of malice present to justify the reduction of identity. Thank you for the way you engaged with the piece.

Best,

Todd