Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park

[Richard]

Hey vagabond,
Thanks for the comments. I don't want to give too much away with this poem, but your wondering about how the speaker can empathize so much with a swan is a valid point. I actually had this point in mind when doing the first edit of the poem, which accounts for some of the changes. I might take this idea even further in a future edit of the poem.

Thanks again,
Richard