We're All Born Knowing All (edit)

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Thanks for the feedback all, I appreciate it. The edit here is a pretty dramatic rewrite, I don't think a single line made it over, but thats mostly what the criticism called for imo. Got a new title and everything. I can see clearly now how the previous version was obtuse, though I thought it was crystal clear when I posted it lol. I think this new version is more explicit, we'll see. I did abandon some of the content that I wanted to include originally in this poem, its only one section now. I'll defend the original poem in saying I did have a clear intention with it, though the readers obviously weren't convinced > . < I'm still on the fence with a few things here, but I figured i'd let to the community have a go at it. Not sure if i'll include a second section now. I think maybe ill just give this poem a sister that lives in the same world, but again, we'll see. Thnx for your time.