Osiris' Crown
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Thanks CRND!

I know there are a couple of places where I've missed a rhyme, or a repeat (comes from changing one thing and not the others) and I'll get back to this soon, with some revisions.

What a huge task! I think we can pat each other on the back, here. Smile

Also many thanks to Cat, for notes.

Egypt was apparently divided into 26 precincts, not 15, so the number of sonnets should probably increase. Some sources give 14 parts, which attracted me to the myth for a crown sonnet. PLus the Master Sonnet,of course, the missing penis.
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Osiris' Crown - by just mercedes - 06-12-2017, 09:47 AM
RE: Osiris' Crown - by just mercedes - 06-14-2017, 09:48 AM
RE: Osiris' Crown - by just mercedes - 06-18-2017, 06:33 AM
RE: Osiris' Crown - by CRNDLSM - 06-18-2017, 11:27 PM
RE: Osiris' Crown - by just mercedes - 06-19-2017, 05:26 AM



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