Beneath a Red Hood (Revision 2.1)

[Lizzie]

Hi Lizzie, thank you for the comments and the close read. I'll clean up some of the areas you mention on revision. I should be able to fix some of the sentence structure. As far as the ending goes, I was thinking of the immediate sexualized context and playing it off of the refrain in my mind--Grandmother, what big ____ you have. I'll give it some more thought.

Much appreciated.

Best,

Todd

Grandmother, what a big wolfhood you have.... 

It works.