06-08-2017, 11:14 PM
(06-08-2017, 08:46 PM)CRNDLSM Wrote: The edit is way better, I see you changed the structure a bit, for the better, however you're supposed to edit the original thread so all the critiques build on so the same poem isn't being rethreaded over and over, bump it with a comment if you made changes.Oops! Sorry about that. The OP has been updated.
I did change the structure. I like it much better, too. Thank you. I'll be working on getting a vocal track down today to help write the music, then post it up on songwriting forums to look for collaborators and producers for a demo. All input is welcome up to the very end.