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Fallout revision 1
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06-08-2017, 08:46 PM
The edit is way better, I see you changed the structure a bit, for the better, however you're supposed to edit the original thread so all the critiques build on so the same poem isn't being rethreaded over and over, bump it with a comment if you made changes.
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Fallout revision 1 - by Jana - 06-06-2017, 10:45 PM
RE: Fallout revision 1 - by nibbed - 06-09-2017, 12:33 PM
RE: Fallout - by Richard - 06-07-2017, 12:19 PM
RE: Fallout - by Jana - 06-07-2017, 01:02 PM
RE: Fallout - by Todd - 06-08-2017, 12:01 AM
RE: Fallout - by Jana - 06-08-2017, 04:43 AM
RE: Fallout - by CRNDLSM - 06-08-2017, 06:11 AM
Fallout revision 1 - by Jana - 06-08-2017, 08:29 AM
RE: Fallout revision 1 - by CRNDLSM - 06-08-2017, 08:46 PM
RE: Fallout revision 1 - by Jana - 06-08-2017, 11:14 PM
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