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[ellajam]

dad spinning Dorsey
old-fashioned
radio plays Jumping Jack Flash

I think I see it as you intended, Ella. But I'm tripping on the line break at L2. I can't help but read "old-fashioned-radio"
Paul

True.
Maybe

Jumping Jack Flash
old-fashioned
dad spinning Dorsey.

or

Radio plays Jumping Jack Flash
old-fashioned
as Dad spinning Dorsey

or maybe a starter for something longer, I guess I should have let it cook a little longer before posting, thanks for reading and commenting.