06-08-2017, 06:11 AM
My phone auto adjusts font size some times it helps to preview post first and send from there.
As far as the words go, there are lots of different ways to write a song, and if it's poetry based, just get the poem edited to where you like it, then sing your song version of it, if you have a recording, there are link options to let people hear it out.
As far as the words go, there are lots of different ways to write a song, and if it's poetry based, just get the poem edited to where you like it, then sing your song version of it, if you have a recording, there are link options to let people hear it out.
(06-06-2017, 10:45 PM)Jana Wrote:Maybe instead of a near repeat of 1st and 2nd half you could make it completely different, another fallout shelter on another side of the world or something. Anyways, post a recording I look forward to hearing it
Fallout
Fallout shelter underground London bridge is falling down, I'm hearing all kinds of things already.
Survival gear scattered around Nice image
Drums of grains bell drums, drums of war good word
Mildew stains
Cold war relics still remain cold war relics doesn't really do it for me, too specific at this point
Rural folks lived to tell
Of days gone by, they knew too well
Nightly war fears stoked
Paranoia stroked
Armageddon's been provoked This is awkward, because oked sound and ell sound so far apart from each compared to the pairs above and below (ain ound, ere ere)
The fallout is here
We see it clear
Racketeering political sphere racketeering while a fun word also too specific for me
Choking off our atmosphere
Armageddon perseveres but I like the ending
Another generation's passed
Fallout shelters holding fast
Nightly war fears stoked
Paranoia stroked
Armageddon's been provoked repeat these three? I do like the oked rhymes though stoke is weird though, maybe choked, I like stroking paranoia
Fallout shelter underground
Survival gear hand-me-downs scattered round
Drums of grains
Mildew stains cause it's still the same, maybe new details
Armageddon's drum still sounds
The fallout is here
We see it clear
Racketeering political sphere
choking off our atmosphere there's choke, choke is good, cloak, soaked I dunno
Armageddon perseveres
This lyric is from a poem I wrote and converted into song format. I hope it's okay to post in this forum. Please ignore the font size differences. I'm not sure how that happened with a straight copy/paste. Odd.
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