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First Edit: Dying Alone
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06-06-2017, 10:15 PM
Thanks for clarifying. I'm not sure how I missed your meaning. Now that you've pointed it out, it's obvious but then makes the first line confusing. Maybe that's what threw me off originally. I was reading it as he was afraid of dying before her. In the next line, he's speaking to her as if she's alive. Then at the end, it gets confusing because there isn't a segue communicating her passing.
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First Edit: Dying Alone - by Richard - 05-28-2017, 05:51 AM
RE: Dying Alone - by Lizzie - 06-01-2017, 02:12 AM
RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-02-2017, 12:51 PM
RE: Dying Alone - by Lizzie - 06-02-2017, 03:29 PM
RE: Dying Alone - by just mercedes - 06-02-2017, 04:14 PM
RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-02-2017, 09:37 PM
RE: Dying Alone - by Achebe - 06-05-2017, 08:23 PM
RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-06-2017, 10:59 AM
RE: Dying Alone - by Jana - 06-06-2017, 09:42 PM
RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-06-2017, 09:58 PM
RE: Dying Alone - by Jana - 06-06-2017, 10:15 PM
RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-07-2017, 11:08 AM
RE: Dying Alone - by Flowerchild1093 - 06-11-2017, 12:35 AM
RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-12-2017, 01:35 AM
RE: First Edit: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-20-2017, 12:47 PM
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