Perversion
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Hey tectak,
Thanks for the feedback. I am always happy to accept some grammar suggestions. As for the title, Todd pretty much nailed its purpose in his critique.

Thanks again,
Richard
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Messages In This Thread
Perversion - by Richard - 05-30-2017, 08:00 AM
RE: Perversion - by thegaslights - 05-30-2017, 01:58 PM
RE: Perversion - by Richard - 05-30-2017, 09:20 PM
RE: Perversion - by Todd - 05-31-2017, 03:23 AM
RE: Perversion - by Richard - 05-31-2017, 08:06 AM
RE: Perversion - by tectak - 06-05-2017, 08:43 PM
RE: Perversion - by Richard - 06-06-2017, 11:09 AM
RE: Perversion - by crow - 06-06-2017, 11:58 PM
RE: Perversion - by Richard - 06-07-2017, 10:02 PM
RE: Perversion - by Brownlie - 06-10-2017, 05:21 PM
RE: Perversion - by tectak - 06-11-2017, 03:45 AM



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