First Edit: Dying Alone

First Edit: Dying Alone

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06-06-2017, 10:59 AM

Hey Achebe,
Thanks for the feedback. I'm letting this one sit for a bit before going back to revise it. I am thinking of changing its format because I have to agree with you that some of the meaning was lost and/or limited by trying to fit in the rhymes.

Thanks again,
Richard

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First Edit: Dying Alone - by Richard - 05-28-2017, 05:51 AM

RE: Dying Alone - by Lizzie - 06-01-2017, 02:12 AM

RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-02-2017, 12:51 PM

RE: Dying Alone - by Lizzie - 06-02-2017, 03:29 PM

RE: Dying Alone - by just mercedes - 06-02-2017, 04:14 PM

RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-02-2017, 09:37 PM

RE: Dying Alone - by Achebe - 06-05-2017, 08:23 PM

RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-06-2017, 10:59 AM

RE: Dying Alone - by Jana - 06-06-2017, 09:42 PM

RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-06-2017, 09:58 PM

RE: Dying Alone - by Jana - 06-06-2017, 10:15 PM

RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-07-2017, 11:08 AM

RE: Dying Alone - by Flowerchild1093 - 06-11-2017, 12:35 AM

RE: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-12-2017, 01:35 AM

RE: First Edit: Dying Alone - by Richard - 06-20-2017, 12:47 PM

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