what i need
#5
thanks.
@jm: the video doesn't work. on the other hand, i have a copy of all his albums, though i think this is from one i've yet to listen to.
@tiger: the spacing was meant to follow haiku convention, at least to the extent that i know it. the comma i found too weak, yet anything else but a space would have been too intrusive. at any rate, if it proves obtrusive, i can just align them back.
@ldl: (it's 17 syllables)

again, thanks.
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what i need - by RiverNotch - 05-28-2017, 10:11 PM
RE: what i need - by LunaDeLore - 06-02-2017, 12:58 AM
RE: what i need - by Tiger the Lion - 06-02-2017, 05:45 AM
RE: what i need - by just mercedes - 06-02-2017, 05:17 PM
RE: what i need - by RiverNotch - 06-03-2017, 06:32 PM



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