sunburn

[vagabond]

Sunburn

 
the sun seems to weigh a ton
but I rationally sit down,
as I intend to rise
the levels of melanin in my hide,
and to colour parts of my brain
where melatonin was drained.
 
Surprised by the touch of a breeze,
gently whispering and cooling the heat
on this almost depigmented skin,
(feels good) I think,
it could turn somewhat red
and then it might shed.



Sunburn                                                (1st edit, please don´t throw me out for that, I blame it to some heat stroke)

the sun weighs a Billyon tons
but I rationally sit down,
..and so on..

 




Sunburn                                                                     (2nd edit, thanks to billy)

 
The sunlight is weighing a ton
but I rationally sit down,
you see, I´m intending to raise
the level of melanin in my hide,
to colour those parts of my brain
where melatonin has been drained.

Surprised by the touch of a breeze,
gently whispering and cooling the heat
on this dry and depigmented skin,
(feels good) I think
it should turn a bright red
and then it might shed.

mainly I hope for responses wether and what kind of meaning can be drawn from this, but any type of comment is appreciated including harsh critique, pointing out embarrassing spelling or grammar errors, jokes, deviations from topic and surreal associations.