what i need
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Hey River. I agree this is a little cryptic, but I like that.

(05-28-2017, 10:11 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:  but this is what i need, or Visions of Alexandra Is this the title or the first line? For me, two completely different readings depend on this distinction.


at the reception
   of the petrified forest,      bamboo I'm not really getting anything from the spacing that the words don't already say. Not sure if you need the added dressing.
                                     in a pot
Enjoyed this one, thanks River.
Paul
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what i need - by RiverNotch - 05-28-2017, 10:11 PM
RE: what i need - by LunaDeLore - 06-02-2017, 12:58 AM
RE: what i need - by Tiger the Lion - 06-02-2017, 05:45 AM
RE: what i need - by just mercedes - 06-02-2017, 05:17 PM
RE: what i need - by RiverNotch - 06-03-2017, 06:32 PM



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