Sapsimile
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(06-02-2017, 04:53 AM)dukealien Wrote:  Sapsimile


Saw sapsucker this PM -
dirty-breasted, herring-backed,
urine-yellow afterparts -
climb the oak in staggered rushes
like a wino red of head
vainly seeking dregs of muscatel -- what about chasing instead of seeking?
in discarded bottles.
I quite like it. Thumbsup I like the sonics of muscatel/bottles. For some reason, I keep reading urine-yellow afterPANTS, and somehow it makes a kind of sense in my head. Hysterical It's probably just because I'm listening for the sap/backed assonance to continue.
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Sapsimile - by dukealien - 06-02-2017, 04:53 AM
RE: Sapsimile - by Lizzie - 06-02-2017, 04:58 AM
RE: Sapsimile - by dukealien - 06-04-2017, 11:23 AM
RE: Sapsimile - by ellajam - 06-04-2017, 06:38 PM



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