06-02-2017, 04:58 AM
(06-02-2017, 04:53 AM)dukealien Wrote: SapsimileI quite like it.
Saw sapsucker this PM -
dirty-breasted, herring-backed,
urine-yellow afterparts -
climb the oak in staggered rushes
like a wino red of head
vainly seeking dregs of muscatel -- what about chasing instead of seeking?
in discarded bottles.
I like the sonics of muscatel/bottles. For some reason, I keep reading urine-yellow afterPANTS, and somehow it makes a kind of sense in my head. 
It's probably just because I'm listening for the sap/backed assonance to continue.