06-02-2017, 12:58 AM
(05-28-2017, 10:11 PM)RiverNotch Wrote: but this is what i need, or Visions of AlexandraRiverNotch,
at the reception
of the petrified forest, bamboo
in a pot
I read this poem an loved it even if "bamboo in a pot" could be considered cryptic or disconnected. It works well for me and gives the ending a nice Haiku feel.
Keep writing.
Luna
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)

