05-26-2017, 05:37 PM
@billy: I've changed it to limp steel. The whole "dead steel... raw sewage" bit was about sexual violence, I think, limp noodle, sad sex, pulsating anger, violence.
I hate the city he talks about in the original. So much splendor and poverty, side by side. Angry transvestites fighting over food. I can't really put it across well.
Revision #2 is up.
- Akshay
I hate the city he talks about in the original. So much splendor and poverty, side by side. Angry transvestites fighting over food. I can't really put it across well.
Revision #2 is up.
- Akshay
The Chronicles of Lethargia