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On 'Gandu Bagicha'
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05-26-2017, 05:06 PM
@Achebe - Thanks a lot for the crit! I'll get to it. Smile

Edit: No drug use is implied in the poem. It's just how Gandu Bagicha made me feel. Maybe it would help if you had a look at the Dhasal translation linked in the first post.
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On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-26-2017, 12:34 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Achebe - 05-26-2017, 01:15 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-26-2017, 01:19 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Richard - 05-26-2017, 01:32 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-26-2017, 01:44 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Lizzie - 05-26-2017, 01:59 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-26-2017, 02:10 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Achebe - 05-26-2017, 04:59 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-26-2017, 05:06 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Lizzie - 05-27-2017, 06:43 AM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by billy - 05-26-2017, 05:16 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-26-2017, 05:37 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by vagabond - 05-27-2017, 11:48 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-28-2017, 11:55 AM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by Radetof.Yahska - 07-05-2017, 08:23 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by just mercedes - 05-28-2017, 12:35 PM
RE: On 'Gandu Bagicha' - by ellajam - 05-28-2017, 06:56 PM



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