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Limbo
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05-26-2017, 03:12 PM
I like the imagery you've created with your wording. The feeling of insignificance you've created actually is quite relatable and I love that you've adequately incorporated that feeling into such a short poem. I'm still having difficulty fitting the first line in with the subject of the rest of the poem but otherwise I think it's great.
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RE: Limbo - by Jo Frumple - 11-22-2016, 12:02 PM
RE: Limbo - by Sparkydashforth - 11-23-2016, 02:06 AM
RE: Limbo - by gedankespieler - 11-25-2016, 12:20 PM
RE: Limbo - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-26-2017, 02:32 PM
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