05-25-2017, 08:22 PM
(05-25-2017, 08:17 PM)milo Wrote:Yep, I had moved shower down one slot, hadn't shuffled it down there. I love this site, the swoop and kill.(05-25-2017, 06:50 PM)rayheinrich Wrote: lilacs burstI agree. The rearrangement allows us to experience 2 events and then a cut to the connection. Subtle change but completely different.
earthworms rise ~
an early shower
yep, pretty close to perfect
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