Second Edit: dying thoughts

Second Edit: dying thoughts

Richard Offline

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05-25-2017, 02:04 PM

Hey all,
I revised this poem again. I am really curious to know if the new ending works or not.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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RE: dying thoughts - by vagabond - 05-20-2017, 08:49 PM

RE: dying thoughts - by Richard - 05-20-2017, 11:37 PM

RE: dying thoughts - by Wjames - 05-22-2017, 05:22 AM

RE: dying thoughts - by nibbed - 05-22-2017, 07:27 AM

RE: dying thoughts - by Richard - 05-22-2017, 11:20 AM

RE: Second Edit: dying thoughts - by Richard - 05-25-2017, 02:04 PM

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