05-25-2017, 10:10 AM
(05-22-2017, 09:57 PM)nibbed Wrote: Don't Looknice title Ive wanted to look and not look
I cleaned my own clockinteresting opening mine are all dusty
by hanging heavily
to every word
of this world;I like the line breaks
trusting scholars,
turning over my life
to the hands of death
as I wasted time selling
my own lying vanities.backing up here, your own lying vanities that you sell is the other half of every word of 'this' world (first half being scholars). But cleaning the clock sounds like a positive outlook on spent time while wasting time lying seems negative, as does hanging heavily, so the don't look title now seems like shameful twist the cleaning, don't look inside at who I am.
Interesting, have a good day!
sorry, I realized the 1st poem
was a big mistake. I tried
to delete it, but it wouldn't
let me, so, I wrote over it
a completely different poem.
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches

