05-24-2017, 02:18 PM
Good night/day tension. Teeters, like a drunk. The end feels almost nasty. Lots packed into this. I like. 
Drunk Text
There are nights - Some nights?
(when) my finger hovers
(poised) over the send button
like a needle at a vein. - over/at, maybe it should be one or the other, not both.
One day you’ll get it. regretful, or threatening - can be read both ways
Drunk Text
There are nights - Some nights?
(when) my finger hovers
(poised) over the send button
like a needle at a vein. - over/at, maybe it should be one or the other, not both.
One day you’ll get it. regretful, or threatening - can be read both ways