Fourth Edit: The Loneliest Feeling

Fourth Edit: The Loneliest Feeling

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05-21-2017, 12:40 PM

Hey dukealien and Billy,
Thanks for the feedback. This poem falls into the category of one of the ones I want to get right, so any suggestions are always appreciated.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Fourth Edit: The Loneliest Feeling - by Richard - 04-30-2017, 11:45 AM

RE: the loneliest feeling - by dukealien - 04-30-2017, 12:56 PM

RE: the loneliest feeling - by Richard - 04-30-2017, 01:53 PM

RE: First Edit: the loneliest feeling - by homer1950 - 05-02-2017, 03:36 PM

RE: First Edit: the loneliest feeling - by nibbed - 05-03-2017, 02:55 AM

RE: First Edit: the loneliest feeling - by Richard - 05-03-2017, 12:01 PM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by Richard - 05-21-2017, 05:22 AM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by dukealien - 05-21-2017, 07:00 AM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by billy - 05-21-2017, 11:54 AM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by Richard - 05-21-2017, 12:40 PM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by Lizzie - 05-24-2017, 01:47 PM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by Richard - 05-26-2017, 12:32 PM

RE: Fourth Edit: The Loneliest Feeling - by Richard - 05-31-2017, 11:48 AM

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