The Lawnmower
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(05-21-2017, 09:45 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  
(05-21-2017, 09:02 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  The last line is a question that doesn't seem that rhetorical. The protagonist doesn't know why, and I, as a reader,
am content to accept the mystery if necessary. Though I think it might have something to do with the obviously ironic lines:
"Paper plates / are good for mixing paints" since they're utterly unsuitable for this purpose. I think the whole poem revolves
around  Jenny Agutter, as each line, especially the "hole" one, can be directly linked to one of her characters.
I wanted to say 'Paper plates ARE suitable for mixing paint, or using as a temporary palette, for an artist. Nothing ironic there, for me.' but we're not supposed to comment on a crit, so I won't.  >Big Grin<

    Oh... I just remembered rolling one up and trying to mix a gallon of house paint with it. Total mess.
    But artsy paint... yeah, makes sense unless you have cats.
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions


Messages In This Thread
The Lawnmower - by shemthepenman - 05-21-2017, 07:44 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by just mercedes - 05-21-2017, 08:08 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by Achebe - 05-21-2017, 08:16 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by rayheinrich - 05-21-2017, 09:02 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by just mercedes - 05-21-2017, 09:45 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by rayheinrich - 05-21-2017, 09:51 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by ellajam - 05-21-2017, 10:23 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by rayheinrich - 05-21-2017, 12:52 PM
RE: The Lawnmower - by billy - 05-21-2017, 11:20 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by shemthepenman - 05-21-2017, 10:41 PM
RE: The Lawnmower - by rayheinrich - 05-22-2017, 06:07 AM



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