05-21-2017, 08:04 AM
Thanks for the read, Duke. GPS used to lag around here and I love maps but it's impressive now, knows every oddball curve in every backroad. It always knocks me for a loop when I run into minimansionland but we still don't lights. 
Thanks, Merc, it was fun to write, it started as a senryu, turned into a tanka but I found myself using woods instead of forests and sacrificing sonics so I went 58588 and stuck it here.
It really was a drive of contrasts, glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks, Merc, it was fun to write, it started as a senryu, turned into a tanka but I found myself using woods instead of forests and sacrificing sonics so I went 58588 and stuck it here.


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