summer haiku written in late spring, quantity 1.5, date: 2017-05-20
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Hi, Ray. L2/3 do it for me, a first I thought "through" might be bothering me, I wasn't sure why so I put it down to sonics, but I think the dishes put you at the sink inside, you may not need L1.
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RE: summer haiku written in late spring, quantity 1, date: 2017-05-20 - by ellajam - 05-20-2017, 07:11 PM



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