This is not my home

This is not my home - edited

Richard Offline

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05-20-2017, 01:11 PM

Hey just mercedes,
I like how you revised poem. Your poem deals with an important concept (Post-Colonialism), and I think you dealt with it in an interesting way. Nice work, and I really dig it Thumbsup

Cheers,
Richard

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This is not my home - edited - by just mercedes - 05-17-2017, 07:25 AM

RE: This is not my home - by Richard - 05-17-2017, 01:47 PM

RE: This is not my home - by just mercedes - 05-17-2017, 02:48 PM

RE: This is not my home - by vagabond - 05-17-2017, 08:41 PM

RE: This is not my home - by tectak - 05-17-2017, 09:43 PM

RE: This is not my home - by just mercedes - 05-18-2017, 04:26 AM

RE: This is not my home - by just mercedes - 05-20-2017, 04:25 AM

RE: This is not my home - edited - by Richard - 05-20-2017, 01:11 PM

RE: This is not my home - edited - by just mercedes - 05-20-2017, 02:26 PM

RE: This is not my home - edited - by Knot - 10-23-2017, 04:04 AM

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