Lessons in life (Part 2 Smoking kills)

[Keith]

Fine piece, Keith. Odd the image of America when the actual scene is mimicked here often enough (if you substitute stickball for your cricket ).
While the idea of running memory like a film is common, this poem sunk its teeth in and stayed with it through the very strong last line, well done. Thanks for the read.

Thank you Ella, yes maybe I was stereo typing a bit, Ha yes extra extended metaphor, just couldn't seem to let go