The Elephant Trap

[shemthepenman]

shem,

I too found it hard to connect the poem and it brings complex questions into light. Should I grow up in the middle; enter and exit through the same door? It just doesn't feel fun but does illustrate introspection. And maybe perfecting such an element of the work, breaking the questions down and bringing the write together is a key to a more success poem.

I do like it.

Hope I've helped,

Luna

thanks.