05-17-2017, 09:55 AM
nothing to add to Jm's feedback except to say it's what [almost] i'd have written.
metaphor is one of the stock poetic devices we should all endevour to use but if they're too far away to workout as most here are; they fail. it's easy for you to understand them, you wrote them, would you understand similar one's if someone else wrote them?
metaphor is one of the stock poetic devices we should all endevour to use but if they're too far away to workout as most here are; they fail. it's easy for you to understand them, you wrote them, would you understand similar one's if someone else wrote them?