05-16-2017, 06:24 AM
Hi Ray,
thanx for commenting and for that poem by emily dickinson (which is beautiful).
i realized the near-rhymes in my poem are not as bad a thing as the near-rhythm or the near-message.
changed some things and it is still bumpy.
but i won´t apologize anymore
thanx for commenting and for that poem by emily dickinson (which is beautiful).
i realized the near-rhymes in my poem are not as bad a thing as the near-rhythm or the near-message.
changed some things and it is still bumpy.
but i won´t apologize anymore