05-15-2017, 12:12 PM
Hey all,
I decided to take some advice and do a revision that involved adding punctuation. I experimented a bit here with that, so please let me know if the poem is better or worse for it.
Thanks everyone,
Richard
I decided to take some advice and do a revision that involved adding punctuation. I experimented a bit here with that, so please let me know if the poem is better or worse for it.
Thanks everyone,
Richard

